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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, scratch that...apparently I didn't say much about her mom's personality in either chapter 5 or chapter 6 [which isn't done yet]. Maybe I dreamed it?  Shocked

I did say something about their marriage when Nicole and Bryan were arguing/making up:

“Bryan, I know all that. I care about you a lot too and I don’t expect some clean cut guy that is exactly like my father. Why do you think I like you in the first place? I don’t want this stupid, fucked up life my parents have with secret affairs and lies and a husband that buys me things to keep me happy as I don’t expect him to come home at night.” She paused. “Us having sex though… that was just too much for me.”

Now I need to figure this out!


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 10:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A little more background on her mom, so we can get our minds wrapped around what kind of woman she is, would probably help us be more sympathetic to your teen's quasi-rebellious attitude, Paige.

Of course, I'm not a writer, but I DO read a lot. Just a thought...

I have to be honest and say it's harder for me, when reading stories ONLINE, if there are NOT screenshots associated with them.
I am hoping you decide to include pics with your new fantasy story. That would be awesome, as I love the different costumes of a whole new world.

I can totally empathyze with you NOT liking to take screenshots. I don't know how Ari and Em do it, to be honest. It takes SO MUCH TIME, setting them up and having them be just right for the storyline.
UGH! I can't even stand to take screenshots of my creations, let alone tell a story through images. Egads!

Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next update.
Remember to post it at Planet the Sims Scribes thread!



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